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PostSubject: BitterSweet   Fri May 03, 2013 10:42 am

Waking licking up the salty taste of my tears
The agony of only having you in my dreams for all these years

Bittersweet having loved so powerful so strong
Knowing we were not meant to have each other for very long

That first time I caught you eye in that rear view mirror
my heart was lost with no escape and it couldn't be any clearer

Me such a trusting wide eyed teenager
Not afraid of love's sharp sting no worry of the danger

Only to end up watching thru glass the line of my tears streaming down my face
As I watched your plane disappear into the clouds knowing this first true love could never be replaced

Oh that old adage of the one that got away
Will haunt me til my dying day!!

And will it be your name I whisper with my last breath?
Bittersweet is this ill fated love I have carried in my heart til death.

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PostSubject: Re: BitterSweet   Fri May 03, 2013 4:07 pm

awww so brill Rolling Eyes

i always feel so lucky i have never been there
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PostSubject: Re: BitterSweet   Fri May 03, 2013 5:08 pm

thats a good read wave
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PostSubject: Re: BitterSweet   Sat May 04, 2013 4:44 am

A Heart felt read that peachy sad1
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PostSubject: Re: BitterSweet   Sat May 04, 2013 5:54 am

Very good. Great reading
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PostSubject: Re: BitterSweet   Sat May 04, 2013 6:53 am

Thanx everyone! Some scars ya never get over xxx
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PostSubject: Re: BitterSweet   Sat May 04, 2013 8:15 am

I really like this.... well written and heart felt tup
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