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PostSubject: Emotional Deamon   Mon Apr 22, 2013 9:05 am

Emotional Deamon

Should I delve into your mind
Leave a mark of some kind
Rip apart everything sacred
Leave you with a taste of acid
Drool over those unspoken thoughts
Then burst them as if I was popping spots
Leave you nowhere to hide
Eyes looking empty and dried
You will wish you were invisable
As you feel weak, small and dispicable
You will dare not let your heart linger
For fear of a emotinal downer
Your dreams are only of fear
As you feel my presence is near
Your corridors and walls wont protect you
And your mind wont have a clue who to argue
So whilst you understand this inhale
But remember it will be to no avail
As for your dreams
I will enjoy watching them break at the seams
Then submit to my hunger
While you ask yourself is this the right answer

1/12/2012 copywrite Jonathan Danyali written after reading a poem by Ann Carruth Donoghue
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PostSubject: Re: Emotional Deamon   Mon Apr 22, 2013 9:10 am

I really enjoyed this, one of your best that i have seen tup
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PostSubject: Re: Emotional Deamon   Mon Apr 22, 2013 9:20 am

Midnight, thank you
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PostSubject: Re: Emotional Deamon   Tue Apr 23, 2013 4:40 am

brill i luved it so gud cool1

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PostSubject: Re: Emotional Deamon   Tue Apr 23, 2013 8:42 am

Very Good jon tup
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PostSubject: Re: Emotional Deamon   Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:13 pm

Tox, Beaver thank you,
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PostSubject: Re: Emotional Deamon   Wed Apr 24, 2013 1:39 am

Very Good! xx

I do sometimes feel I have a Emotional Demon lurking inside!
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PostSubject: Re: Emotional Deamon   Wed Apr 24, 2013 4:58 am

Peachy. Thank you br1:
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