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PostSubject: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyMon Mar 25, 2013 9:04 am

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Write a short four line rhyme that starts with the last line of the previous post Very Happy



Today it snowed, it snowed galore
It snowed and snowed, and snowed some more
Will this winter ever end
Its simply driving me round the bend...........


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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyThu Jun 20, 2013 9:53 am

The start of the clocks ticks till tonight
At the stroke of twelve its mischief night
Shapes and shadows, across the ceiling
A bony hand stripped of feeling
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyThu Jun 20, 2013 10:02 am


The bony hand's stripped of feeling
My heart alive, thumping wildly beating
As i wince in pain i stab pins into it
Then my arm numbs too, a heart attack imminent



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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyThu Jun 20, 2013 10:12 am

Then my arm numbs too a heart attack imminent 
A breathless moment for the innocent
Then just for a second time stands still
A realization of a forgotten pill
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyThu Jun 20, 2013 10:21 am


A realisation of a forgotten pill
I clutch at my chest, briefly, time stands still
I fumble wildy, dripping sweat, for the phone to call
For help, but i've left it downstairs in the hall..... No
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyThu Jun 20, 2013 10:44 am

For help ,but I've left it downstairs in the hall
The movers came than went which caused a stall
clearly those movers are not on the ball
and they left the bill,imagine such gull
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PostSubject: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyThu Jun 20, 2013 8:09 pm

and they left the bill,imagine such gall
whatever happened to good will and all?
The night's antics have vanished, I sigh with a smile
As I snuggle back under the duvet for a while.  Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyThu Jun 20, 2013 10:41 pm

As i snuggle back under the duvet for a while
night's dream's not quite finished yet
hidden in swirling mist's of mystical enlightenmeant's
warmth, envelope's body's comfort zone.cool2
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PostSubject: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyFri Jun 21, 2013 3:42 am

warmth, envelope's body's comfort zone,
Damn, there goes that blessed phone,
Peace destroyed, sanctuary invaded,
I have to get up, but feeling so jaded!  Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyFri Jun 21, 2013 4:04 am


i have to get up but feeling so jaded
my compassion for humaniy feels so faded
i look at the life that swarms around me
i wish they wud back away before i go crazy
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyFri Jun 21, 2013 4:45 am

I wish they wud back away befor I go crazy
Everything is looking so very very hazey
It's not a good time to be feeling so lazy
entangled in what seems so mazy
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyFri Jun 21, 2013 5:28 am


Entangled in what seems so mazy
A busy day gone on a flash, just crazy!
I ponder what to do with my spare time
i know, visit Chatterbox to leave a rhymelgh6

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PostSubject: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyFri Jun 21, 2013 8:48 am

I know, visit Chatterbox to leave a rhyme!
Something jovial rather than whine,
'Cos whinging ain't a lotta fun,
Nor's this blooming rain, I want more SUN!!  bounce
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyFri Jun 21, 2013 5:40 pm

Nor's this blooming rain ,I want some sun
the rain's no fun and when yer try'en to get something done
when it rains it pours, ain't that a pun
than comes the thunder ,it sounds like a gun
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyFri Jun 21, 2013 7:43 pm

Then come's Thunder,it sound's like rain
music of the God's playing again
has Thor dropped his Hammer again
no just the patter of rain again.
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyFri Jun 21, 2013 8:32 pm

Just the patter of rain again
Peter piper Jack & Jill mother goose and a French hen
again a hen was then ben Fen
because he crushed beavers den lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptySat Jun 22, 2013 9:25 am

because he crushed beavers den
and his name was Ben
he was a tall thin lanky sort of geezer
and he loved his cider
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptySat Jun 22, 2013 8:05 pm

And he loved his cider,i no not why
apple's should be in a pie
water and hopp's made for the God's
a thirst quencher which is top's.
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptySat Jun 22, 2013 8:14 pm

A thirst quencher which is tops
in places they call it soda pops
in the fifties they danced the hip hops
the soda pop hip hops was tops performed by a cyclops
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptySat Jun 22, 2013 8:27 pm

The soda pop's hip hop's was performed by a cyclop's
over here cyclop's would have been pie eyed
in a drunken state he would eye the Girl's
his vision you see was quite blured.
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PostSubject: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptySun Jun 23, 2013 4:09 am

his vision you see was quite blurred,
But he carried on quite undeterred.
What's around the next corner?
Something exciting.............or just another yawner??  wave
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptySun Jun 23, 2013 9:18 am

wave?????????????
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????????????????
I supose just a yawner Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyMon Jun 24, 2013 4:59 am

I suppose just a yawner
it may have dawned on her
if it did it was spawned I am sure but not pawned
at the aquarium the place to belong
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyMon Jun 24, 2013 6:21 am

at the aquarium the place to belong
for creatures that dwell in the depths of dark waters
creatures of stranger pallid colours and form
untuched by suns penetratin light


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PostSubject: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyMon Jun 24, 2013 8:08 am

untouched by suns penetrating light
they swim in the depths out of sight.
Dark & murky like shadows below.
What's their purpose we do not know.Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: Four Line Rhyme   Four Line Rhyme - Page 11 EmptyMon Jun 24, 2013 9:30 am

What's their perpose,we do not no
could it be nature's deep sea show
illuminateing colour's that supprize
hiden from light,not for us to see cool2
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