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PostSubject: My Poetry "Seaside"   Thu Feb 28, 2013 11:06 am

Bare foot on the beach
Hot golden sand soft between my toes
A simple pleasure, makes me feel good
Waves gently lapping the shoreline

A rush of warm blue water trickles over my feet
A crest of foaming salt water bubbles
The sound of rolling waves, the brief chatter of water
Children's laughter, a dog barks somewhere

A simple pleasure free to all
Hand in hand, was once you and me
The view is endless, like our love was
Though now we are separate, i feel your spirit

It rides the waves like a ghost on water
A figure clad in black, paddling out to meet the surf
Majestically you ride the blue rolling swells
I watch transfixed by the splendor, the beauty
They practice their fine art, fine tune their skills

The beaches adorned with mighty castles
Frantic digging, build a moat quick!
Finally tide catches up, crumbling them all
A mighty fortress defeated by water
Rolling tides now, lapping the rocks

A crab scuttles from its hiding place
The sun goes down on the edge of the world
Reflections on the water, like the memories of my mind
Sunblest, deep blue, and swell:)

"Seaside"
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PostSubject: Re: My Poetry "Seaside"   Thu Feb 28, 2013 8:53 pm

very good, i enjoyed the read
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PostSubject: Re: My Poetry "Seaside"   Thu Feb 28, 2013 11:30 pm

Thank you kindly.
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